A Troubling Development (Changed Tomorrows excerpt)

After a lengthy hiatus, I’m back at work on Changed Tomorrows. I hope you’ll enjoy this wee excerpt.

Seconds after hearing the buzz of what he thought was an insect, Dustu heard the report of a rifle some distance rearward. Both boys instinctively laid forward on their horses necks and dug their heels into their flanks. After galloping at full tilt for a minute or so, Dust dared to steal a look behind them.

“Fly like the wind brother, he’s gaining on us!” Again, two pairs of heels urged the beasts to give more speed. The horses, sensing the urgency, responded by running even faster. At this speed the tiniest misstep would result in almost certain death for both horse and rider.

A stand of young pines beckoned, promising a little cover and the boys veered left in the hopes of disappearing in the trees. They would sacrifice some speed, but hoped the lack of visibility would make up for it. Just before they penetrated the copse another shot rang out. This time the shooter’s aim was a little better and Jim felt the hot lead ball searing into the meaty part of his right thigh.

“Dustu, I’m hit!”

“Where? Can you still ride?”

Jim knew he had to keep riding. Both their lives depended on it.

“I can, it’s only my leg!” he yelled as he urged his horse to carry him away.

Every step the horse made sent an electric jolt of pain up and down Jim’s leg. It wasn’t unbearable pain, but it was certainly making its presence known. There was a faint tingling sensation that seemed to be riding the pain like he was riding his horse.

In his preoccupation with the wound, he nearly failed to notice Dustu veering sharply to the left and disappearing into the trees. The hoofbeats softened and then stopped. Now, he could only hear his own horse trotting and breathing heavily. A thicker stand of trees just ahead looked like a promising spot to elude their pursuer, and he nudged the horse’s neck and headed in. As he did, he wondered; ‘Where did Dustu go?’

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About Ol' Big Jim

Jim L. Wright is a storyteller with a lifetime of experiences as colorful as the characters he creates. Born and raised in Piedmont, Alabama, Jim’s connection to the land, history, and people of the region runs deep. His debut novel New Yesterdays is set in his hometown, where he grew up listening to stories of the past—stories that sparked his imagination and curiosity for history. Today, Jim lives in Leeds, Alabama, with his husband Zeek, a tour operator who shares his passion for adventure and discovery. Known affectionately as “Ol’ Big Jim,” he has had a diverse career that includes time as a storekeeper, an embalmer, a hospital orderly, and a medical coder. There are even whispers—unconfirmed, of course—that he once played piano in a house of ill repute. No matter the job, one thing has remained constant: Jim is a teller of tales. His stories—sometimes humorous, sometimes thought-provoking—are often inspired by his unique life experiences. Many of these tales can be found on his popular blog, Ol’ Big Jim, where he continues to share his musings with a loyal readership. Jim’s adventures have taken him far beyond Alabama. For seven years, he lived in Amman, Jordan, the world’s oldest continuously inhabited city. His time there, spent in smoky coffee shops, enjoying a hookah and a cup of tea while scribbling in his ever-present notebook, deeply influenced his worldview and his writing. When Jim isn’t writing, he’s thinking about writing. His stories, whether tall tales from his past or imaginative reimagining is of historical events should read from his past or imaginative reimaginings of historical events, reflect a life lived fully and authentically. With New Yesterdays, Jim brings readers a rich tapestry of history, fantasy, and human connection. Visit his blog at www.olbigjim.com to read more of his stories, or follow him on social media to keep up with his latest musings and projects, one of which is a series that follows Bonita McCauley, an amateur detective who gets into some very sticky situations. His book, New Yesterdays, can be found at Amazon US, Amazon UK, Smashwords, and Barnes and Noble.
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2 Responses to A Troubling Development (Changed Tomorrows excerpt)

  1. Excellent excerpt, Jim. 😁

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  2. I sure enjoyed it. Good work.

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