The Silence That Waited

The door sagged open slow, and the air met him cold, still, thick, as if it had been holding its breath too long.

The chair by the fire. His father there. Tilted head. The book fallen, pages whispering dry like dead leaves.

“Dad—?” but the word cracked small, no echo.

He stepped. The floor groaned, but his father did not. Fire half-dead, red eyes blinking slow in the grate. Shadows longer than they had any right to be.

He touched the shoulder. Cold. Not sleeping cold, not “let him rest” cold. The other kind. The forever kind.

The hand limp, stone already. He felt it run up his arm, into his chest. Hollowed him.

The house leaned closer then. Beams, walls, all listening, waiting, crowding in with the silence. That smell—ash, iron, damp wood. And beneath it, something older, sour, like the ground opened a little beneath the floorboards.

Outside the window, the crow flung itself into the gray sky, ragged wings beating, caw tearing the air. He thought: it knows. It knows.

On his knees then, clutching at the hand, at the shell, at the shape that once filled the rooms with voice and laughter and noise. But this wasn’t him. Just husk, just vessel, just house after the tenant fled.

He wanted to shake it, call it back, bargain. But knew—knew in marrow and blood, in the hollows of his teeth—that it was no use.

The silence heavy. A silence that wasn’t empty but full, crowded with something vast and unseen.

And the thought—so sudden it staggered him—someday me. Me in this chair, still, cold, house breathing over me.

The fire spat once, a hiss, then sank to red ash.

He knelt there, boy no longer, not yet man, eyes full of the long silence. Changed forever.

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About Ol' Big Jim

Jim L Wright has been a storekeeper, an embalmer, a hospital orderly, and a pathology medical coder, and through it all, a teller of tall tales. Many of his stories, like his first book, New Yesterdays, are set in his hometown of Piedmont, Alabama. For seven years he lived in the oldest continuously inhabited city in the world, Amman, Jordan where he spent his time trying to visit every one of the thousands of Ammani coffee shops and scribbling in his ever-present notebook. These days he and his husband, Zeek, live in a cozy little house in Leeds, Alabama. He’s still scribbling in his notebooks when he isn’t gardening or refinishing a lovely bit of furniture. His book, New Yesterdays, can be found at Amazon US, Amazon UK, Smashwords, and Barnes and Noble.
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7 Responses to The Silence That Waited

  1. Darryl B's avatar Darryl B says:

    Wow, that’s really good writing, Ol’ Big Jim. Truly. So evocative… the smell of ash, iron, damp wood… the crow… the realization.

    I bought your book; now that everything is behind us, I’m looking forward to delving into it 😎

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  2. Excellent , Jim. Could almost feel the coldness of the old man.The forever kind (brilliant)

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  3. Fascinating story, Jim, poignant that his dad would be forever cold.

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