Chapter 12 – Tommy Wayne Returns – The House That Wouldn’t Let Go

The old place sat at the corner of Ladiga Street and 5th Avenue, still shouldered by oaks that leaned too close, like they were whisperin’ warnings. The front gate hung crooked, the latch long rusted through. I pushed it open slow, and it gave out a sound like a sigh. Like it’d been holding its breath fifteen years waiting on me to come back.

I don’t rightly know what I expected. Maybe for the porch to crumble, the roof to cave in, or for the whole place to’ve given up, like Aunt Lily Pearl’s memory was all that kept it standing. But it wasn’t gone. It was just… waiting.

The windows were clouded, the paint peeled, but the heart of it, the bones of home, still stood firm. Every board and nail seemed to hum with something alive, something that remembered me even if I wished it wouldn’t.

I stepped onto the porch. The boards underfoot creaked my name in the same rhythm she used to call it: Tom-my-Wayne, Tom-my-Wayne…

When I opened the front door, the air that came out was thick and cold, like a cellar that had been holding secrets too long. The parlor was just as she left it, doilies yellowed on the arms of the chairs, a Bible open on the table like she’d stepped away mid-verse, the smell of rosewater faint but still clinging.

And on the mantel, I swear it near stopped my heart, was her locket. The one she never took off, not even to sleep. It shouldn’t have been there. Sheriff Cole himself told me he buried her with it.

I picked it up, thumbed open the clasp, and inside were two pictures: one of her, smiling like the sun itself, and the other of me, ten years old, gap-toothed, and grinning.

Then, faint as breath on a mirror, came the whistle.

Soft. Familiar.
The same tune she used to hum shellin’ peas on summer afternoons.

I froze, the locket trembling between my fingers.

The sound drifted from the kitchen; slow, wavering, like it was moving down the hall.
My heart hammered, but my feet carried me forward anyway.

The kitchen looked half-frozen in time: a chipped enamel basin, the kettle still on the stove, and a row of mason jars lined up like soldiers. The curtains fluttered, though no wind came through.

And on the table — written in the dust, clear as day — were the words:

“YOU KNOW IT WEREN’T YOUR FAULT.”

The locket dropped from my hand, hit the floor with a hollow clink.

“Lily Pearl?” I whispered.

The whistle stopped.

And from the doorway behind me, in that space between memory and dream, a shape stirred. Faint, thin as smoke, wearing an apron and a sorrowful smile.

Then the kitchen light blinked once and went dark.

*****

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About Ol' Big Jim

Jim L. Wright is a storyteller with a lifetime of experiences as colorful as the characters he creates. Born and raised in Piedmont, Alabama, Jim’s connection to the land, history, and people of the region runs deep. His debut novel New Yesterdays is set in his hometown, where he grew up listening to stories of the past—stories that sparked his imagination and curiosity for history. Today, Jim lives in Leeds, Alabama, with his husband Zeek, a tour operator who shares his passion for adventure and discovery. Known affectionately as “Ol’ Big Jim,” he has had a diverse career that includes time as a storekeeper, an embalmer, a hospital orderly, and a medical coder. There are even whispers—unconfirmed, of course—that he once played piano in a house of ill repute. No matter the job, one thing has remained constant: Jim is a teller of tales. His stories—sometimes humorous, sometimes thought-provoking—are often inspired by his unique life experiences. Many of these tales can be found on his popular blog, Ol’ Big Jim, where he continues to share his musings with a loyal readership. Jim’s adventures have taken him far beyond Alabama. For seven years, he lived in Amman, Jordan, the world’s oldest continuously inhabited city. His time there, spent in smoky coffee shops, enjoying a hookah and a cup of tea while scribbling in his ever-present notebook, deeply influenced his worldview and his writing. When Jim isn’t writing, he’s thinking about writing. His stories, whether tall tales from his past or imaginative reimagining is of historical events should read from his past or imaginative reimaginings of historical events, reflect a life lived fully and authentically. With New Yesterdays, Jim brings readers a rich tapestry of history, fantasy, and human connection. Visit his blog at www.olbigjim.com to read more of his stories, or follow him on social media to keep up with his latest musings and projects, one of which is a series that follows Bonita McCauley, an amateur detective who gets into some very sticky situations. His book, New Yesterdays, can be found at Amazon US, Amazon UK, Smashwords, and Barnes and Noble.
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2 Responses to Chapter 12 – Tommy Wayne Returns – The House That Wouldn’t Let Go

  1. Lifetime Chicago's avatar Lifetime Chicago says:

    Love this one!

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