Terrapin Creek in Full Swell

As Told by Jimmy Matthew and Jim Leroy, Who Were Under Strict Orders Not to Go Near It

There are creeks, there are rivers, and then there is Terrapin Creek after a week of March rain. Lord help us all. That little ribbon of water that usually ran so polite and clear suddenly got ideas above its raisin’. It puffed up, swelled out, and marched through the woods like it was reclaimin’ lost territory. Trees leaned away from it. Rocks disappeared under it. And the whole thing roared like an angry calf with its tail caught in a gate.

Now, my mother gave me one instruction that morning. It was short, clear, and delivered with the same tone sheriffs use right before they read a man his rights.

“Do not, under any circumstance, go anywhere near Terrapin Creek. Not to look. Not to wonder. Not to even breathe the same air.”

Problem was, she gave the same instruction to Jimmy Matthew.

When adults say “do not,” Jimmy hears “what are you waitin’ for.”

I was halfway through a peanut butter sandwich when Jimmy marched through the back door without knockin’, without greetin’, and without any concern for the sanctity of my mother’s floors.

“Terrapin’s runnin’ wild,” he said, all worked up. “I heard it from Bertie Lou’s daddy who heard it from a man at the mill who saw it from the bridge. He said it looks like the creek is tryin’ to climb out of its own self.”

I said, “We ain’t goin’.”

Jimmy said, “I ain’t askin’.”

He never did.

We set out across the field behind my house, slippin’ and slidin’ through mud that tried its level best to steal our shoes. The sky hung low, heavy with clouds that looked like they had one more good rain in them. The air smelled of wet leaves, grass, and somethin’ electric. The whole world felt swollen.

By the time we reached the ridge where the land dipped down toward the creek, we could hear it. Lord, could we hear it. It wasn’t a creek anymore. It was a stampede made of water. A freight train made of foam. A choir of angry baptisms.

“Jim,” Jimmy whispered, peepin’ through the brush, “it ain’t right for water to make that kind of noise.”

He was correct. Terrapin Creek roared like it wanted a fight.

We eased out onto an overlook where we could see it proper. The water had climbed clean out of its banks. It churned and boiled. It spun whirlpools big enough to swallow a fishing boat. The air was so thick with mist, it gave us freckles of cold water.

Jimmy squinted real serious.

“You know,” he said, “we might be the only two people who ever saw Terrapin Creek this mad.”

I said, “That is because everybody else has got some sense.”

Jimmy ignored that.

“I bet I could outrun it.”

I grabbed his shirt.

“You ain’t runnin’ nowhere. This is how folks get their names in the paper, and not in the celebratory sections.”

We stood there a long while, watchin’ the water throw tree limbs around like toothpicks. The whole world felt alive, charged, almost musical. It was terrifyin’… and it was beautiful.

Somewhere down the banks, a big root ball rolled past like a giant’s tumbleweed.

Jimmy gasped.

“Look at that. That is the size of Mrs. Langley’s Buick.”

I nodded.

“Yep. And the creek picked it up like it was nothin’.”

Jimmy grinned a grin that ought to have come with a safety warning.

“You wanna get a little closer?”

“No.”

“We can just take one step.”

“No.”

“What if we crawl?”

“Absolutely not.”

“What if we hold hands so we double our intelligence?”

“I am not holdin’ your hand.”

He shrugged.

“Suit yourself, Jim. But this is history.”

Now, against all better judgment and every childhood survival instinct, I let curiosity steer the wheel. We edged down the slope. The mud tried to skitter us toward the water, but we fought gravity like two boys who knew Mama would tan our hides if the creek didn’t get us first.

We reached a safe-enough distance.
Close enough to feel the spray.
Close enough to smell the cold.
Far enough to avoid bein’ swallowed whole.

And just then, Terrapin Creek made a sound I had never heard from water in my entire life.

It growled.

A deep, rolling rumble like the earth itself was speakin’. It started low, rose higher, and exploded in a crash that shook the bank under our feet.

Jimmy froze.

“Jim Leroy… that creek ain’t natural.”

I nodded.

“We better go.”

“Yep.”

We ran.
We slid.
We flailed.
We hollered the whole way back.

By the time we reached my yard, soaked and laughin’ like fools, Mother was standin’ on the porch with that look that made my soul leave my body for just a moment.

She said, “Where have you been?”

Before I could answer, Jimmy piped up with:

“We was keepin’ a respectful distance from the Lord’s handiwork.”

Mama stared.
Blinkin’.
Not buyin’ a word.

I said, “We might’ve accidentally been near Terrapin Creek.”

Jimmy added, “But we saw history.”

Mama closed her eyes.

“I’m goin’ to tell your Mawmaw, and she will pray for both of you.”

Jimmy said, “We could use it.”

That night, long after supper, I lay in bed listenin’ to the rain tick the tin roof. I thought of Terrapin Creek roarin’ like a hungry beast. I thought of how close we got. I thought of how beautiful it was.

And I thought of Jimmy Matthew, who was a hazard to himself, me, and the entire system of parental authority.

But Lord, it was a day worth rememberin’.

A day the creek was alive.
A day we was fools.
A day spring itself kicked the door open and hollered hello.

I reckon that is what March is for.

*****

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About Ol' Big Jim

Jim L. Wright is a storyteller with a lifetime of experiences as colorful as the characters he creates. Born and raised in Piedmont, Alabama, Jim’s connection to the land, history, and people of the region runs deep. His debut novel New Yesterdays is set in his hometown, where he grew up listening to stories of the past—stories that sparked his imagination and curiosity for history. Today, Jim lives in Leeds, Alabama, with his husband Zeek, a tour operator who shares his passion for adventure and discovery. Known affectionately as “Ol’ Big Jim,” he has had a diverse career that includes time as a storekeeper, an embalmer, a hospital orderly, and a medical coder. There are even whispers—unconfirmed, of course—that he once played piano in a house of ill repute. No matter the job, one thing has remained constant: Jim is a teller of tales. His stories—sometimes humorous, sometimes thought-provoking—are often inspired by his unique life experiences. Many of these tales can be found on his popular blog, Ol’ Big Jim, where he continues to share his musings with a loyal readership. Jim’s adventures have taken him far beyond Alabama. For seven years, he lived in Amman, Jordan, the world’s oldest continuously inhabited city. His time there, spent in smoky coffee shops, enjoying a hookah and a cup of tea while scribbling in his ever-present notebook, deeply influenced his worldview and his writing. When Jim isn’t writing, he’s thinking about writing. His stories, whether tall tales from his past or imaginative reimagining is of historical events should read from his past or imaginative reimaginings of historical events, reflect a life lived fully and authentically. With New Yesterdays, Jim brings readers a rich tapestry of history, fantasy, and human connection. Visit his blog at www.olbigjim.com to read more of his stories, or follow him on social media to keep up with his latest musings and projects, one of which is a series that follows Bonita McCauley, an amateur detective who gets into some very sticky situations. His book, New Yesterdays, can be found at Amazon US, Amazon UK, Smashwords, and Barnes and Noble.
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