Whodunnit?

houseThe little town of Piedmont, Alabama, nestled in the foothills of the Appalachians would never again be the same. The deep, heavy rumble of thunder rolled across the “Mill Village” landscape. But, something was different; the sound seemed to come from underground. Before a question could be formed the surface of the ground bulged upward like a bizarre earthen balloon. The earth suddenly burst open in a blast of intense heat and a rush of superheated air. A propane delivery truck and Harry Wilkes’ car parked next to the house were thrown into the air like broken twigs. The small frame house on Woolf Avenue that Harry inherited from his parents disintegrated into tiny bits of shrapnel that flew in all directions. The twisted wreckage of one truck fell in the YMCA swimming pool two blocks away, while the car crashed next door into Melvin Pott’s kitchen as he poured the last cup of coffee from the pot. The house was instantly engulfed in flames. Melvin, who had never driven, had fought a life-long fear of being hit by a car as he crossed the street. He never knew it was Harry’s beautifully restored 1955 Packard that did him in.

Two blocks away on Eubanks Street, Lillie Pearl Watson was just settling in after her shift at the nursing home when she heard the explosion. She watched in horror as her china cabinet fell over, spilling out her prized collection of collectible plates. The coffee mug she held fell to the floor as the blast of hot air and debris blew the windows inward. Thankfully, she only sustained a few cuts and a nasty bruise where her head made contact with the coffee table.

Nearly every house in the neighborhood was thrown about, broken or otherwise upset. Thanks to the valiant efforts of the fire department, only Harry’s and Melvin’s houses were completely destroyed, but nearly all his neighbors had varying amounts of damage.

“I can’t believe Harry’s dead! Maybe if I’d seen his body, or attended a proper funeral it might be easier to accept.” Like everyone else in town, Walter Morgan was still in shock weeks later. As it was, there had been nothing left of Harry to be viewed or buried. He’d been vaporized in that horrific explosion.

Delivery TruckHarry’s Propane had been in business for more than twenty years. Truth be told, it was closer to seventy years because he had bought the business from the original owner, Mr Cleo, when he decided it was time to hang up the nozzle and go fishing. Cleo taught Harry everything there was to know about the operation of the business in just a few days. The more important facets of operating the business came over time. While he had no formal training, Cleo was a master of public relations. He was respected and well liked by everyone in this sleepy little hamlet in the foothills of the Appalachian Mountains. As the months stretched into years, they came to accept Harry as Cleo’s protégé.

Question_Mark_by_BushlemonHarry had a talent for dealing with people.  Why then, did someone rig his propane truck to explode? What motive could have led to the murder of one of Piedmont’s most beloved citizens?

It’s your turn. Tell me how you think the story will go.

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About Ol' Big Jim

Jim L. Wright is a storyteller with a lifetime of experiences as colorful as the characters he creates. Born and raised in Piedmont, Alabama, Jim’s connection to the land, history, and people of the region runs deep. His debut novel New Yesterdays is set in his hometown, where he grew up listening to stories of the past—stories that sparked his imagination and curiosity for history. Today, Jim lives in Leeds, Alabama, with his husband Zeek, a tour operator who shares his passion for adventure and discovery. Known affectionately as “Ol’ Big Jim,” he has had a diverse career that includes time as a storekeeper, an embalmer, a hospital orderly, and a medical coder. There are even whispers—unconfirmed, of course—that he once played piano in a house of ill repute. No matter the job, one thing has remained constant: Jim is a teller of tales. His stories—sometimes humorous, sometimes thought-provoking—are often inspired by his unique life experiences. Many of these tales can be found on his popular blog, Ol’ Big Jim, where he continues to share his musings with a loyal readership. Jim’s adventures have taken him far beyond Alabama. For seven years, he lived in Amman, Jordan, the world’s oldest continuously inhabited city. His time there, spent in smoky coffee shops, enjoying a hookah and a cup of tea while scribbling in his ever-present notebook, deeply influenced his worldview and his writing. When Jim isn’t writing, he’s thinking about writing. His stories, whether tall tales from his past or imaginative reimagining is of historical events should read from his past or imaginative reimaginings of historical events, reflect a life lived fully and authentically. With New Yesterdays, Jim brings readers a rich tapestry of history, fantasy, and human connection. Visit his blog at www.olbigjim.com to read more of his stories, or follow him on social media to keep up with his latest musings and projects, one of which is a series that follows Bonita McCauley, an amateur detective who gets into some very sticky situations. His book, New Yesterdays, can be found at Amazon US, Amazon UK, Smashwords, and Barnes and Noble.
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3 Responses to Whodunnit?

  1. Old man Jenkins down in the hollar got sideways with Harry over the supply of propane for his meth lab. Harry wouldn’t play ball and Jenkins had enough of trying to get his supply increased. He arranged to have an electric burner installed and then took his revenge on Harry. No one will suspect Jenkins until the electric meter reader disappears.

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  2. Love it Jim. 🙂

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