Relevance

The creak of Curtis’ knees as he stood from his armchair sounded louder than the morning news. At seventy-two, the world outside his bay window seemed to accelerate daily, leaving him stranded on a quiet island of routine. His grown children called dutifully, voices tinged with the distracted warmth reserved for museum pieces. His grandchildren, vibrant galaxies of energy and screens, spoke a language of acronyms and apps he couldn’t decipher. Even the corner bakery, where he’d bought the same bread loaf for forty years, now had a touchscreen ordering system that beeped impatiently at his hesitation.

Curtis felt like a ghost haunting his own life. His opinions on the weather, the state of the roads, the price of coffee were met with polite nods that swiftly turned elsewhere. His hands, once skilled at fixing leaky faucets and refinishing furniture, now trembled slightly, and replacements were cheaper and faster ordered online. He was a relic, a dusty old encyclopedia in the age of search engines.

Bright and early one crisp Tuesday morning, the feeling crystallized into a sharp ache. He stood in the fluorescent glare of the bustling supermarket, fumbling with a self-checkout machine. A young woman with a manager’s badge materialized. “Need a hand, sir?” Her smile was professional, but her eyes were already scanning the lengthening line behind him. She scanned his items with swift efficiency, her fingers dancing over the screen. “There you go,” she chirped, handing him the receipt. Her tone was kind, but it carried the unspoken message: Let me handle this, it’s easier for everyone. He felt so unnecessary.

Later, sorting through the attic – a task born of restless irrelevance – Curtis unearthed an old, ornate mantel clock. It had belonged to his grandfather, a master cabinetmaker. Curtis remembered its resonant chime filling his childhood home. Now, it was silent, covered in a shroud of dust, its intricate brass gears frozen. He’d always meant to fix it, but life, work, family just got in the way. So, it had just sat, waiting. Like him.

He carried it downstairs, the weight substantial in his arms. He cleared a space on his workbench in the garage; a space mostly used for storing garden tools these days. He found his old leather toolkit; the leather was dried and cracked but the brass latches still gleamed. As he carefully opened the clock’s back panel, a complex world of tiny cogs, springs, and levers greeted him. Dust motes danced in the slanting afternoon light.

He remembered his grandfather’s voice, patient and steady: “See, Curtis? Each piece has its place. Nothing is irrelevant. Find the broken tooth, the bent spring, the gummed-up pivot.”

Hours dissolved. Curtis’s world narrowed to the delicate mechanism. His trembling fingers, frustrating at first, found a familiar steadiness as he cleaned decades of grime with a tiny brush dipped in solvent. He identified a broken mainspring tooth and a pivot point crusted solid. Using miniature files and oil, he worked with a focus he hadn’t felt in years. The frustration of the supermarket, the ache of feeling unseen, melted away, replaced by the tactile puzzle before him.

Just as he was reassembling the final gear train, the garage door rattled open. Leo, his ten-year-old grandson, burst in, cheeks flushed from biking. “Pop! Mama said you were out here…” He trailed off, eyes wide, drawn to the guts of the clock spread across the bench. “Whoa! What’s that?”

“It’s your great-great-grandfather’s clock,” Curtis said, his voice raspy from disuse. “It’s broken.”

Leo edged closer, fascinated. “Can you fix it?” The question held genuine curiosity, not the polite dismissal Curtis was used to hearing.

“I’m trying to, son,” Curtis murmured. He showed Leo the tiny parts, explaining the broken tooth, the stiff pivot. Leo watched, utterly absorbed, asking surprisingly perceptive questions. “Why does that gear turn that one?” “What makes the ding sound?”

Curtis found himself explaining escapements and pendulum physics, his words flowing easily. He handed Leo a tiny brush. “Here, help me clean this little cog. Gently now.” Leo’s tongue peeked out as his small fingers worked with intense concentration.

Finally, Curtis lowered the last brass plate into place and secured it. He carefully wound the clock. A tense silence filled the garage. Then, a soft, hesitant tick… tick… tick began. It grew stronger, steadier. Curtis held his breath. The minute hand jerked forward. It was working.

Leo gasped, a sound of pure wonder. “You did it, Grandpa! You fixed it!” His eyes shone with unadulterated admiration. “No, son, we fixed it!”.

Curtis set the hands to the correct time. As the small brass hammer struck the chime rod for the first time in decades, a clear, sweet ding resonated through the garage. The sound seemed to vibrate in Curtis’s own chest.

He looked at Leo’s awestruck face, then down at his own grease-smudged hands. The irrelevance he’d carried like a stone felt lighter. He hadn’t conquered the digital world or regained the spotlight of his prime. But in this dusty garage, illuminated by his grandson’s wide eyes and the steady heartbeat of a resurrected clock, Curtis found something vital: a connection. His hands, his knowledge – passed down, then seemingly forgotten – still held value. They could still mend something broken, still create wonder in a new generation.

The clock chimed again, marking the hour. Curtis placed a hand on Leo’s shoulder. “Tell you what,” he said, a warmth returning to his voice he hadn’t heard in years, “tomorrow, I’ll show you how to oil the gears. Every clock needs to be looked after.” Leo nodded eagerly, already captivated by the intricate, ticking world his grandfather had unlocked. The irrelevance hadn’t vanished, Curtis knew, but it had receded, replaced by the quiet, resonant chime of purpose found in unexpected places. He was still here. And for now, that was enough.

*****

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About Ol' Big Jim

Jim L. Wright is a storyteller with a lifetime of experiences as colorful as the characters he creates. Born and raised in Piedmont, Alabama, Jim’s connection to the land, history, and people of the region runs deep. His debut novel New Yesterdays is set in his hometown, where he grew up listening to stories of the past—stories that sparked his imagination and curiosity for history. Today, Jim lives in Leeds, Alabama, with his husband Zeek, a tour operator who shares his passion for adventure and discovery. Known affectionately as “Ol’ Big Jim,” he has had a diverse career that includes time as a storekeeper, an embalmer, a hospital orderly, and a medical coder. There are even whispers—unconfirmed, of course—that he once played piano in a house of ill repute. No matter the job, one thing has remained constant: Jim is a teller of tales. His stories—sometimes humorous, sometimes thought-provoking—are often inspired by his unique life experiences. Many of these tales can be found on his popular blog, Ol’ Big Jim, where he continues to share his musings with a loyal readership. Jim’s adventures have taken him far beyond Alabama. For seven years, he lived in Amman, Jordan, the world’s oldest continuously inhabited city. His time there, spent in smoky coffee shops, enjoying a hookah and a cup of tea while scribbling in his ever-present notebook, deeply influenced his worldview and his writing. When Jim isn’t writing, he’s thinking about writing. His stories, whether tall tales from his past or imaginative reimagining is of historical events should read from his past or imaginative reimaginings of historical events, reflect a life lived fully and authentically. With New Yesterdays, Jim brings readers a rich tapestry of history, fantasy, and human connection. Visit his blog at www.olbigjim.com to read more of his stories, or follow him on social media to keep up with his latest musings and projects, one of which is a series that follows Bonita McCauley, an amateur detective who gets into some very sticky situations. His book, New Yesterdays, can be found at Amazon US, Amazon UK, Smashwords, and Barnes and Noble.
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1 Response to Relevance

  1. Nice story, Jim. It’s good that Curtis was able to fix the clock and Leo got to see it happen.

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