Promise Keeping at Terrapin Creek

A Piedmont Lantern Story

Quinton Rhinehart had kept his promise longer than he’d kept most things.

He parked where the dirt road gave up pretending and walked the rest of the way, the bottle tucked under his arm like it might slip away if he loosened his grip. Terrapin Creek sounded the same as it always had, water over stone, patient and unconcerned, which felt comforting.

“Thirty,” Quinton said aloud, stepping into the clearing. “You never did like round numbers.”

He set the bottle down on the flat rock they’d always used, the one with the white scar through it that Keith claimed looked like Tennessee if you squinted. Quinton unscrewed the cap and poured a little onto the ground first. Old habit. Old respect.

“Happy birthday,” he said.

“That’s a cheap whiskey for a milestone.”

Quinton froze.

He didn’t turn around right away. Folks who grow up around Terrapin Creek learn early not to rush things that don’t make sense yet.

“Figured you’d complain,” Quinton said finally. “You always did.”

“Well,” Keith Bullock replied, sounding mildly offended, “you could’ve at least sprung for the good stuff.”

Quinton turned then.

Keith sat on the log by the water, elbows on his knees, looking exactly like he had the last summer they’d been boys together — lean, sun-browned, grinning like he knew something Quinton didn’t. He wore the same old flannel shirt, sleeves rolled, cuffs frayed.

“You’re late,” Keith said.

Quinton laughed once, sharp and wet. “You’re dead.”

Keith considered that. “Yeah, I been hearin’ rumors ’bout that.”

They sat in silence awhile, the creek doing its work between them. Quinton poured another splash, this time into two cups without thinking about it.

“You shouldn’t be here,” Quinton said.

Keith picked up his cup anyway. “Neither should you. But you did make a promise.”

Quinton swallowed. “I did.”

Keith clinked his cup against Quinton’s. The sound was solid. Real enough to hurt.

They drank.

Keith wiped his mouth with the back of his hand. “You look older.”

“You don’t,” Quinton said.

“Perks of not stickin’ around,” Keith replied lightly. Then, softer, “I didn’t mean to go when I did.”

“I know.”

“I hated leavin’ you with all that quiet,” Keith said. “You was always bad with it.”

Quinton stared at the water. “You missed a lot.”

Keith nodded. “I know.”

They talked then, the way they always had. About nothing much. About everything. Keith listened when Quinton spoke of the years after, the weight of them, the way life kept movin’ like it didn’t know it was bein’ rude.

When the bottle was half-empty and the light had started to thin, Keith stood.

“Time,” he said.

Quinton’s chest tightened. “You gonna stay?”

Keith smiled, gentle and familiar. “Nah. I just came to see if you was gonna show up.”

He stepped back toward the trees, the edges of him already softening, like memory does when you don’t chase it.

“Hey,” Quinton said. “Happy birthday.”

Keith grinned. “You too.”

And then he was gone.

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About Ol' Big Jim

Jim L. Wright is a storyteller with a lifetime of experiences as colorful as the characters he creates. Born and raised in Piedmont, Alabama, Jim’s connection to the land, history, and people of the region runs deep. His debut novel New Yesterdays is set in his hometown, where he grew up listening to stories of the past—stories that sparked his imagination and curiosity for history. Today, Jim lives in Leeds, Alabama, with his husband Zeek, a tour operator who shares his passion for adventure and discovery. Known affectionately as “Ol’ Big Jim,” he has had a diverse career that includes time as a storekeeper, an embalmer, a hospital orderly, and a medical coder. There are even whispers—unconfirmed, of course—that he once played piano in a house of ill repute. No matter the job, one thing has remained constant: Jim is a teller of tales. His stories—sometimes humorous, sometimes thought-provoking—are often inspired by his unique life experiences. Many of these tales can be found on his popular blog, Ol’ Big Jim, where he continues to share his musings with a loyal readership. Jim’s adventures have taken him far beyond Alabama. For seven years, he lived in Amman, Jordan, the world’s oldest continuously inhabited city. His time there, spent in smoky coffee shops, enjoying a hookah and a cup of tea while scribbling in his ever-present notebook, deeply influenced his worldview and his writing. When Jim isn’t writing, he’s thinking about writing. His stories, whether tall tales from his past or imaginative reimagining is of historical events should read from his past or imaginative reimaginings of historical events, reflect a life lived fully and authentically. With New Yesterdays, Jim brings readers a rich tapestry of history, fantasy, and human connection. Visit his blog at www.olbigjim.com to read more of his stories, or follow him on social media to keep up with his latest musings and projects, one of which is a series that follows Bonita McCauley, an amateur detective who gets into some very sticky situations. His book, New Yesterdays, can be found at Amazon US, Amazon UK, Smashwords, and Barnes and Noble.
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6 Responses to Promise Keeping at Terrapin Creek

  1. I wish I could meet my friends like this. Maybe if I had had the time to promise, I might have been able. Great, Jim

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  2. Fascinating, Jim, and awesome to me that Quinton and Keith met. I’ve never met friends and relatives that I lost, though I carry them in my heart and mind.

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