May 5 – The Week of Rain

A Piedmont Lantern Story

By Monday, the town had decided to be sensible.

That is often the first mistake.

“Sensible” meant assuming Vernon Tate had left of his own accord. Sensible meant not borrowing trouble before breakfast. Sensible meant letting a dark porch light stay dark without turning it into prophecy.

Still, the rain kept returning to the conversation.

Not dramatically. Just like the weather does.

“It rained near seven days straight,” Beulah Mae said, stirring her coffee with more force than required. “I remember because my gutters overflowed.”

Pearl nodded. “Babbling Brook ran high.”

“Highway 78 was near treacherous,” Earl added. “Red clay’ll get you sliding if you don’t respect it.”

That last line hung in the air a second longer than it ought to have.

Nobody said Vernon’s name.

Not right then.

But the thought had begun to stitch itself quietly into the week.

Late February.

Heavy rain.

High water.

Slick curves.

By midmorning, Mrs. Hollis had convinced herself she remembered seeing Vernon at the Piggly Wiggly just before the storm started.

“He had a loaf of bread and one of those small cartons of milk,” she insisted over the phone. “I’m nearly certain.”

Her sister paused. “Was that this year?”

There are moments when memory reveals itself to be mostly imagination wearing confidence like an Easter hat.

“Well,” Mrs. Hollis said carefully, “it could’ve been January.”

That didn’t help.

Down at the bank, someone mentioned the rain again while discussing insurance claims from minor fender-benders.

“78 saw a few cars slide that week,” the teller said. “Nothing serious, though.”

Oliver Kinzalow stood within earshot and felt something in his chest tighten.

Nothing serious.

He told himself that phrase was sufficient.

He had not seen an accident report with Vernon’s name attached. He had not heard from the sheriff about any incidents involving a tan Buick. He had not been notified of any emergency.

Therefore, nothing serious.

And yet.

He remembered Vernon leaving that meeting.

The sky had already turned gray.

Vernon had paused at the doorway and said, almost absently, “I don’t drive the interstate.”

Oliver had nodded, distracted by papers on the desk.

“I prefer Highway 78,” Vernon had added. “It’s slower. Feels steadier.”

Steadier.

Oliver had said something agreeable. He could not now recall what.

On Babbling Brook Road that afternoon, Pearl parked at the curb for the first time all week.

She did not knock.

She only sat with the engine off and listened.

The house did not sound abandoned. Houses do, if you listen close enough. They creak differently when empty. They settle more deeply.

The Tate house felt… paused.

She stepped out, walked as far as the edge of the yard, and stopped.

The grass showed no recent tire impressions. Not sharp ones, anyway. Rain had come and gone since February. The earth had softened and hardened and softened again.

If a car had left during that rain, any clear tracks would’ve long since blurred.

Pearl folded her arms and looked at the dark porch light.

“Since when?” she said again, but this time the question carried weight.

Across town, the Mary Magdalene Methodist Retirement Village brochure sat on a side table in the fellowship hall. A watercolor rendering showed cheerful seniors strolling along manicured paths. There was even a small green space near the edge of the drawing, trees and benches sketched in optimistic ink.

Someone had penciled in “pending final parcel acquisition” in the margin.

No one connected that phrase to the dark house on Babbling Brook Road.

Not yet.

That evening, Beulah Mae sat on her porch and watched the sky turn the color of old pewter.

She tried again to remember.

The last time she’d seen Vernon in the diner, he had declined pie. That much she knew.

“Trying to behave,” he’d said with a small smile.

It struck her now that he had looked tired.

Or had he?

Memory shifts under scrutiny. It rearranges itself to suit new conclusions.

The rain came up again before bedtime.

“It rained for nearly a week,” Earl repeated, as if lengthening it might produce clarity.

“Road was slick,” Pearl replied.

“And he don’t drive the interstate,” Beulah Mae added quietly.

The three of them looked at one another.

That was the first time Vernon’s name and the rain occupied the same sentence in public.

The shift was subtle.

But it was real.

Later, long after the diner lights went dark and the courthouse clock announced ten, Babbling Brook Road lay under a sky that threatened more weather.

The porch light at the Tate house remained unlit.

The driveway remained empty.

And somewhere beyond the curve of Highway 78, where gullies ran deeper than they appeared from the shoulder and rainwater carved paths that did not announce themselves, the memory of that week lingered.

Piedmont did not yet know what it was remembering.

But it had begun to remember something.

And that, more than anything else so far, was what made the air feel different.

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About Ol' Big Jim

Jim L. Wright is a storyteller with a lifetime of experiences as colorful as the characters he creates. Born and raised in Piedmont, Alabama, Jim’s connection to the land, history, and people of the region runs deep. His debut novel New Yesterdays is set in his hometown, where he grew up listening to stories of the past—stories that sparked his imagination and curiosity for history. Today, Jim lives in Leeds, Alabama, with his husband Zeek, a tour operator who shares his passion for adventure and discovery. Known affectionately as “Ol’ Big Jim,” he has had a diverse career that includes time as a storekeeper, an embalmer, a hospital orderly, and a medical coder. There are even whispers—unconfirmed, of course—that he once played piano in a house of ill repute. No matter the job, one thing has remained constant: Jim is a teller of tales. His stories—sometimes humorous, sometimes thought-provoking—are often inspired by his unique life experiences. Many of these tales can be found on his popular blog, Ol’ Big Jim, where he continues to share his musings with a loyal readership. Jim’s adventures have taken him far beyond Alabama. For seven years, he lived in Amman, Jordan, the world’s oldest continuously inhabited city. His time there, spent in smoky coffee shops, enjoying a hookah and a cup of tea while scribbling in his ever-present notebook, deeply influenced his worldview and his writing. When Jim isn’t writing, he’s thinking about writing. His stories, whether tall tales from his past or imaginative reimagining is of historical events should read from his past or imaginative reimaginings of historical events, reflect a life lived fully and authentically. With New Yesterdays, Jim brings readers a rich tapestry of history, fantasy, and human connection. Visit his blog at www.olbigjim.com to read more of his stories, or follow him on social media to keep up with his latest musings and projects, one of which is a series that follows Bonita McCauley, an amateur detective who gets into some very sticky situations. His book, New Yesterdays, can be found at Amazon US, Amazon UK, Smashwords, and Barnes and Noble.
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2 Responses to May 5 – The Week of Rain

  1. It is becoming clear that Vernon and the rain are connected. Well told, Jim.

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