May 7 – The Gully

A Piedmont Lantern Story

By Wednesday, the town had grown quieter about Vernon Tate, which is how you know something has taken hold.

When folks are merely curious, they chatter.

When they are uneasy, they listen.

The Huddle House carried on as usual, but the volume had lowered a notch. Pearl noticed it first. She always did.

“Anybody drive 78 lately?” Beulah Mae asked, stirring her coffee though it did not require stirring.

Earl nodded. “Yesterday. Clear as a bell.”

“Clear now,” Beulah Mae replied. “Wasn’t in February.”

That was the first time anyone said it plain.

Highway 78.

Not just rain.

Not just memory.

The road.

Mrs. Hollis, who had made it her quiet mission to recall something useful, spoke up. “Didn’t they pull a car out of a ditch down that way back then?”

Earl frowned. “They pull cars out of ditches every time it rains.”

“Yes, but that week,” she insisted. “The creek was up. Road slick. They had cones out near the curve past the old timber bend.”

Earl shrugged. “I don’t recall it being Vernon.”

Nobody had said it was.

But the thought had taken shape now.

Down at the hardware store, two men discussed the same curve. The one where the shoulder dipped without warning, and the guardrail stopped too soon.

“Deep gully there,” one of them said. “You slide wrong, you’d go down farther than folks realize.”

The other nodded. “Hard to see from the road, too. Trees hide it.”

That detail settled.

Hard to see from the road.

On Babbling Brook Road, the Tate house remained stubbornly ordinary. The grass had been cut recently enough that it did not look neglected. The windows were closed but not boarded. A place waiting, not abandoned.

Pearl drove past midafternoon and slowed again.

She imagined, for the first time, a car leaving that driveway during the rain.

She imagined red clay turning slick.

She imagined a careful man gripping the wheel a little tighter than usual.

She did not know why she imagined it.

She only knew the image would not leave her.

Across town, Oliver Kinzalow sat at his desk and reviewed preliminary projections for Mary Magdalene Methodist Retirement Village. The numbers were promising. Investors were patient, but not endlessly so.

He had told himself, repeatedly, that Vernon would come around.

That progress always met resistance at first.

That a man like Vernon, orderly and practical, would see the inevitability of it.

He remembered the meeting again.

“You’ve been the subject of talk,” Oliver had said gently. “It would be unfortunate for that to complicate matters.”

Vernon had looked at him then, steady as ever.

“I’ve done nothing improper,” Vernon had replied.

“I didn’t say you had,” Oliver had answered.

That was the truth.

He had not accused.

He had only suggested.

Oliver leaned back in his chair now and felt a flicker of something he did not care to name.

At the diner that evening, the conversation circled back to the rain as if it had been waiting its turn.

“Creek nearly topped its banks,” Earl said.

“And 78 don’t have much shoulder in places,” Pearl added.

“That curve past the timber bend,” Mrs. Hollis murmured. “I’ve never liked it.”

“Nobody likes that curve,” Earl replied.

“But not everybody takes the interstate,” Beulah Mae said quietly.

There it was again.

Vernon did not drive the interstate.

That detail had become an anchor.

It was something solid in a sea of guesswork.

Pearl dried a glass and looked out the diner window toward the road.

“Has anyone checked?” she asked.

“Checked what?” Earl replied, though he knew.

“Down 78,” Pearl said.

Silence.

Not defensive. Not dismissive.

Just the weight of realizing no one had.

Later, as dusk fell and the town’s porch lights came alive one by one, Beulah Mae found herself at the edge of Highway 78 without having quite planned it.

She told herself she was only out for a drive.

The road curved gently at first, then more sharply near the timber bend. The guardrail ended sooner than it ought to have. The shoulder dipped.

She slowed.

The trees were thick along the slope, branches weaving together like fingers.

From the road, the land beyond the curve looked ordinary. Slightly lower. Slightly overgrown.

She pulled onto the shoulder and stepped out.

The earth still bore faint scars where rainwater had carved narrow channels weeks before. The clay had hardened again, but the memory of water remained in its shape.

She took a cautious step toward the edge.

It was steeper than she had thought. Dizzyingly so.

The gully below ran deeper than it appeared from the road. Thick brush covered most of it. Fallen branches lay tangled in the undergrowth.

If something had slid down there during a storm, it would not announce itself.

Beulah Mae stood very still.

She did not see a car.

She did not see debris.

She saw only how easily something could disappear from view.

The wind moved through the trees, soft and steady.

She swallowed.

“Since when?” she whispered again, though now the question felt less like idle curiosity and more like reckoning.

Back in town, the Tate house remained dark.

The porch light had not come on.

The driveway held no Buick.

And for the first time, the town’s unease had shifted from wondering where Vernon had gone to wondering where they had not looked.

Highway 78 lay quiet under the fading light.

The gully waited.

And Piedmont, at last, had begun to understand that rain does more than fall.

Sometimes, it hides.

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About Ol' Big Jim

Jim L. Wright is a storyteller with a lifetime of experiences as colorful as the characters he creates. Born and raised in Piedmont, Alabama, Jim’s connection to the land, history, and people of the region runs deep. His debut novel New Yesterdays is set in his hometown, where he grew up listening to stories of the past—stories that sparked his imagination and curiosity for history. Today, Jim lives in Leeds, Alabama, with his husband Zeek, a tour operator who shares his passion for adventure and discovery. Known affectionately as “Ol’ Big Jim,” he has had a diverse career that includes time as a storekeeper, an embalmer, a hospital orderly, and a medical coder. There are even whispers—unconfirmed, of course—that he once played piano in a house of ill repute. No matter the job, one thing has remained constant: Jim is a teller of tales. His stories—sometimes humorous, sometimes thought-provoking—are often inspired by his unique life experiences. Many of these tales can be found on his popular blog, Ol’ Big Jim, where he continues to share his musings with a loyal readership. Jim’s adventures have taken him far beyond Alabama. For seven years, he lived in Amman, Jordan, the world’s oldest continuously inhabited city. His time there, spent in smoky coffee shops, enjoying a hookah and a cup of tea while scribbling in his ever-present notebook, deeply influenced his worldview and his writing. When Jim isn’t writing, he’s thinking about writing. His stories, whether tall tales from his past or imaginative reimagining is of historical events should read from his past or imaginative reimaginings of historical events, reflect a life lived fully and authentically. With New Yesterdays, Jim brings readers a rich tapestry of history, fantasy, and human connection. Visit his blog at www.olbigjim.com to read more of his stories, or follow him on social media to keep up with his latest musings and projects, one of which is a series that follows Bonita McCauley, an amateur detective who gets into some very sticky situations. His book, New Yesterdays, can be found at Amazon US, Amazon UK, Smashwords, and Barnes and Noble.
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