May 16 – The Visit

A Piedmont Lantern Story

Sawyer Kate did not announce her return to Piedmont.

She simply arrived.

She drove straight from Birmingham to Babbling Brook Road, parked in the empty drive where the tan Buick had once sat, and stood for a moment beneath the porch light.

It was still on, though the sun had not yet set.

Good, she thought. Let them see it.

Inside, the house smelled faintly of closed rooms and lemon oil. She walked from room to room, slowly reacquainting herself with the place the way one does after an absence that feels longer than it was.

Nothing ransacked.
Nothing disturbed.
Just waiting.

She set her bag down and then, without much ceremony, turned and drove across town.

Oliver Kinzalow was in his office when she arrived.

He did not keep her waiting.

He rose, extended a hand, and offered condolences in the careful tone of a man accustomed to managing appearances.

“I’m relieved your uncle survived,” he said.

“So am I,” Sawyer Kate replied evenly.

They sat.

She did not rush.

“My uncle remembers the meeting,” she said.

Oliver folded his hands.

“I would expect he might,” he replied. “It was not contentious.”

She held his gaze.

“He remembers the word inevitable.”

Oliver allowed himself the faintest smile.

“In civic planning, inevitability is not a threat. It is a projection.”

“And rumors?” she asked.

He paused.

“I reminded him that public perception can complicate development efforts,” he said. “That was not a threat. It was a fact.”

“For whom?” she asked quietly.

The question landed sharper than her tone.

Oliver leaned back slightly.

“I have never intended harm to your uncle,” he said. “Nor would I.”

She nodded once.

“I believe that,” she replied.

That surprised him.

“But intention,” she continued, “is not the same as effect.”

He didn’t answer.

She stood.

“My uncle will be returning home,” she said. “In time.”

“I wish him well,” Oliver replied.

“And the land?” she asked.

He hesitated.

“That remains his decision.”

She gave him a long look.

“Yes,” she said. “It does.”

At the Huddle House, her arrival had already been noticed.

“She went straight to Kinzalow,” Beulah Mae whispered.

Pearl poured coffee.

“She would,” she said.

“Is she looking to make trouble?” Earl asked.

“No,” Pearl replied. “She’s looking to make sure no one else does.”

Sheriff Reeves sat quietly at the end of the counter.

“He didn’t break the law,” he said.

“No,” Pearl agreed. “But he pressed.”

“Pressing ain’t a crime,” Earl muttered.

“Sometimes it is,” Pearl replied softly. “Just not the kind you can charge.”

In Birmingham, Vernon completed another circuit of the hallway.

“I want to go home,” he said to Sister Bernadette.

“You will,” she replied.

“Soon?”

“If your balance continues,” she said gently.

He nodded.

He didn’t speak of Oliver again.

But he did say something else.

“I walked a long way,” he murmured.

“Yes,” she said.

“I remember thinking I must not stop.”

She studied him.

“Why?” she asked.

He looked at his hands.

“Because stopping felt like surrender,” he replied.

Back in Piedmont, the retirement village investors held another quiet call.

“He’s alive,” one voice said.

“And regaining memory,” another added.

“That complicates leverage.”

Oliver listened without speaking.

When they finished, he said only this:

“We proceed carefully.”

That night, the diner stayed open a little later than usual.

The town felt poised.

Not angry.
Not triumphant.

Just waiting.

On Babbling Brook Road, Sawyer Kate turned off the porch light before bed.

She stood a moment in the darkened yard.

“Not inevitable,” she whispered.

Inside, the house creaked softly as it settled.

Somewhere between rain and curve and careful words, something had shifted in Piedmont.

It was no longer about what happened in the gully.

It was about what happens next.

And that, as every small town knows, is where real stories begin.

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About Ol' Big Jim

Jim L. Wright is a storyteller with a lifetime of experiences as colorful as the characters he creates. Born and raised in Piedmont, Alabama, Jim’s connection to the land, history, and people of the region runs deep. His debut novel New Yesterdays is set in his hometown, where he grew up listening to stories of the past—stories that sparked his imagination and curiosity for history. Today, Jim lives in Leeds, Alabama, with his husband Zeek, a tour operator who shares his passion for adventure and discovery. Known affectionately as “Ol’ Big Jim,” he has had a diverse career that includes time as a storekeeper, an embalmer, a hospital orderly, and a medical coder. There are even whispers—unconfirmed, of course—that he once played piano in a house of ill repute. No matter the job, one thing has remained constant: Jim is a teller of tales. His stories—sometimes humorous, sometimes thought-provoking—are often inspired by his unique life experiences. Many of these tales can be found on his popular blog, Ol’ Big Jim, where he continues to share his musings with a loyal readership. Jim’s adventures have taken him far beyond Alabama. For seven years, he lived in Amman, Jordan, the world’s oldest continuously inhabited city. His time there, spent in smoky coffee shops, enjoying a hookah and a cup of tea while scribbling in his ever-present notebook, deeply influenced his worldview and his writing. When Jim isn’t writing, he’s thinking about writing. His stories, whether tall tales from his past or imaginative reimagining is of historical events should read from his past or imaginative reimaginings of historical events, reflect a life lived fully and authentically. With New Yesterdays, Jim brings readers a rich tapestry of history, fantasy, and human connection. Visit his blog at www.olbigjim.com to read more of his stories, or follow him on social media to keep up with his latest musings and projects, one of which is a series that follows Bonita McCauley, an amateur detective who gets into some very sticky situations. His book, New Yesterdays, can be found at Amazon US, Amazon UK, Smashwords, and Barnes and Noble.
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