The Things Children Notice That Adults Forget

A Piedmont Porchlight Story

Hattie was washing the front windows of the Coffee Cup when a little boy stopped on the sidewalk. He couldn’t have been more than five or six. He looked at the window for the longest time. Never said a word.

Finally, Hattie opened the door. “Can I help you, Honey?”

He pointed. “There’s a ladybug.”

She smiled. “Well, it sure is. How ‘bout that?”

He watched it crawl across the glass like it was putting on a show just for him. After a minute his mama called from halfway down the sidewalk. “Come on!”

“I’m coming!”

He gave the ladybug one last look. Then ran to catch up. Hattie sat down across from Curtis and me.

“You know what?”

“What?” I asked.

“I walked right past that ladybug three times.”

Curtis folded the funny papers. “So did I.”

I looked out the window. “Well, I reckon I did, too.”

Funny thing about children. They notice the things we’ve gotten too busy to see. I remember being about that little boy’s age. I knew exactly which board on Mawmaw’s porch squeaked the loudest. I knew where the biggest lightning bugs floated after dark. I knew which tree the first dogwood blooms always showed up on. I knew where the katydids sang the loudest.

And I knew the exact minute Daddy’s truck turned off the highway. Not because I could see it. Because I could hear it.

Curtis smiled. “I used to know every bird’s nest in our pasture.”

“What happened?”

“I grew up.”

Hattie nodded slowly. “I used to know where every four-leaf clover was.”

“You found that many?”

“No.”

“But I sure looked.” That made us all laugh.

Outside, Earl Johnson walked by carrying his grandson on his shoulders. The little fellow pointed toward the courthouse lawn.

“Papa!”

“What?”

“Look!”

“What am I lookin’ at?”

“That cloud looks like a rabbit.”

Earl looked up.

“I’ll be. I reckon it does.”

The little boy laughed like he’d just discovered America.

Funny thing is, by the time I looked up the rabbit was already gone. Or maybe I’d forgotten how to see it. For just a minute, none of us said anything. The ceiling fan hummed overhead. Somewhere in the kitchen, a biscuit pan clattered. Outside, the little boy was still pointing at things nobody else seemed to notice.

Hattie smiled into her coffee. “I think children remind the world to slow down.”

I nodded. “I think they remind us how.”

Funny thing about growing older. We learn how to make a living. We learn how to keep appointments. We learn how to hurry.

Children. They remind us to stop. To look at a ladybug. To watch a cloud. To listen for the first cricket of the evening. To chase one more lightning bug. Maybe that’s why grandparents enjoy children so much.

They’ve finally grown old enough to start noticing all the things they forgot.

And I reckon that’s a mighty fine way to grow young again.

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About Ol' Big Jim

Jim L. Wright is a storyteller with a lifetime of experiences as colorful as the characters he creates. Born and raised in Piedmont, Alabama, Jim’s connection to the land, history, and people of the region runs deep. His debut novel New Yesterdays is set in his hometown, where he grew up listening to stories of the past—stories that sparked his imagination and curiosity for history. Today, Jim lives in Leeds, Alabama, with his husband Zeek, a tour operator who shares his passion for adventure and discovery. Known affectionately as “Ol’ Big Jim,” he has had a diverse career that includes time as a storekeeper, an embalmer, a hospital orderly, and a medical coder. There are even whispers—unconfirmed, of course—that he once played piano in a house of ill repute. No matter the job, one thing has remained constant: Jim is a teller of tales. His stories—sometimes humorous, sometimes thought-provoking—are often inspired by his unique life experiences. Many of these tales can be found on his popular blog, Ol’ Big Jim, where he continues to share his musings with a loyal readership. Jim’s adventures have taken him far beyond Alabama. For seven years, he lived in Amman, Jordan, the world’s oldest continuously inhabited city. His time there, spent in smoky coffee shops, enjoying a hookah and a cup of tea while scribbling in his ever-present notebook, deeply influenced his worldview and his writing. When Jim isn’t writing, he’s thinking about writing. His stories, whether tall tales from his past or imaginative reimagining is of historical events should read from his past or imaginative reimaginings of historical events, reflect a life lived fully and authentically. With New Yesterdays, Jim brings readers a rich tapestry of history, fantasy, and human connection. Visit his blog at www.olbigjim.com to read more of his stories, or follow him on social media to keep up with his latest musings and projects, one of which is a series that follows Bonita McCauley, an amateur detective who gets into some very sticky situations. His book, New Yesterdays, can be found at Amazon US, Amazon UK, Smashwords, and Barnes and Noble.
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