May 19 – The Polite Delay

A Piedmont Lantern Story

Monday morning arrived with paperwork.

Not the dramatic kind.

The quiet, respectable kind that moves things in small towns more surely than any speech ever could.

At City Hall, a clerk in a sensible cardigan stamped a document, paused, and then set it gently in the “pending clarification” tray.

Not denied.

Not approved.

Just… delayed.

At the Huddle House, Pearl slid a plate of toast toward Earl.

“You hear they pushed the preliminary grading permit back?” she asked.

Earl raised his eyebrows.

“Technical review,” he said.

Pearl gave him a look.

“Mm-hmm.”

Sheriff Reeves, seated at the end of the counter, stirred his coffee once.

“Environmental runoff concerns,” he said mildly.

Beulah Mae leaned in.

“Since when has that stretch of red clay concerned anybody?”

The sheriff did not smile.

“Since the paperwork started getting read a little closer.”

That settled the matter for the moment.

In Piedmont, delay rarely arrives wearing boots. It comes in sensible shoes and carries a clipboard.

Across town, Oliver Kinzalow ended a phone call with careful calm.

“Yes,” he said. “I understand.”

Pause.

“No, this doesn’t materially alter the timeline.”

Pause.

“We will proceed.”

He set the receiver down and stood very still for a moment.

He had not been denied.

But the smooth path forward had developed… texture.

He did not like texture.

In Birmingham, Vernon completed his morning therapy and sat with Sister Bernadette near the window.

“They say I may be discharged by the end of the week,” he told her.

Her smile was warm.

“You’ve worked for it.”

He nodded.

Then he said something new.

“I remember the service road.”

Bernadette’s attention sharpened gently.

“Tell me.”

He closed his eyes.

“After the car stopped… I walked downhill. Not up.”

That mattered.

“The rain was still coming,” he continued. “Hard enough to blur any view of the shoulder.”

He lifted his hand slowly, tracing something in the air.

“I thought if I could just reach the lower road…”

His voice faded.

“And then?” she asked softly.

He opened his eyes.

“Nothing straight after that.”

But more had come back.

That much was clear.

Back in Piedmont, Sawyer Kate stood on the Tate porch with Sheriff Reeves.

“They’re slowing the project,” she said.

“Not stopping,” the sheriff replied.

“No,” she agreed. “Just slowing.”

He leaned lightly against the rail.

“Sometimes slow is enough.”

She looked out toward the distant line where survey flags dotted the neighboring land.

“My uncle is not selling,” she said.

“I know,” the sheriff replied.

They stood in companionable quiet for a moment.

Then the sheriff added, almost to himself:

“Funny thing about polite pressure. It tends to lose its grip when a man survives what was supposed to wear him down.”

That afternoon, rain threatened again but never quite committed.

Clouds gathered.

Air pressed low.

The kind of weather that makes memory feel closer to the surface.

In his Birmingham room, Vernon sat upright and spoke aloud, though no one had asked him anything.

“He said the town prefers cooperation.”

Sister Bernadette looked up from her chart.

“And what did you say?” she asked.

Vernon’s mouth twitched faintly.

“I said the land prefers patience.”

For the first time since the accident, Bernadette let herself smile wide.

As dusk settled over Piedmont, the diner filled with the low, steady hum of a town adjusting its expectations.

Not retreating.

Not advancing.

Just… recalibrating.

On Babbling Brook Road, the porch light came on right at sunset.

Steady.

Unapologetic.

And over at the development site, Oliver Kinzalow stood beside the freshly straightened survey stake and realized something he did not care for at all:

The timeline was no longer inevitable.

It was negotiable.

And in Piedmont, negotiations can stretch a very long time.

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About Ol' Big Jim

Jim L. Wright is a storyteller with a lifetime of experiences as colorful as the characters he creates. Born and raised in Piedmont, Alabama, Jim’s connection to the land, history, and people of the region runs deep. His debut novel New Yesterdays is set in his hometown, where he grew up listening to stories of the past—stories that sparked his imagination and curiosity for history. Today, Jim lives in Leeds, Alabama, with his husband Zeek, a tour operator who shares his passion for adventure and discovery. Known affectionately as “Ol’ Big Jim,” he has had a diverse career that includes time as a storekeeper, an embalmer, a hospital orderly, and a medical coder. There are even whispers—unconfirmed, of course—that he once played piano in a house of ill repute. No matter the job, one thing has remained constant: Jim is a teller of tales. His stories—sometimes humorous, sometimes thought-provoking—are often inspired by his unique life experiences. Many of these tales can be found on his popular blog, Ol’ Big Jim, where he continues to share his musings with a loyal readership. Jim’s adventures have taken him far beyond Alabama. For seven years, he lived in Amman, Jordan, the world’s oldest continuously inhabited city. His time there, spent in smoky coffee shops, enjoying a hookah and a cup of tea while scribbling in his ever-present notebook, deeply influenced his worldview and his writing. When Jim isn’t writing, he’s thinking about writing. His stories, whether tall tales from his past or imaginative reimagining is of historical events should read from his past or imaginative reimaginings of historical events, reflect a life lived fully and authentically. With New Yesterdays, Jim brings readers a rich tapestry of history, fantasy, and human connection. Visit his blog at www.olbigjim.com to read more of his stories, or follow him on social media to keep up with his latest musings and projects, one of which is a series that follows Bonita McCauley, an amateur detective who gets into some very sticky situations. His book, New Yesterdays, can be found at Amazon US, Amazon UK, Smashwords, and Barnes and Noble.
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