May 20 – The Shape of Waiting

A Piedmont Lantern Story

By Tuesday, Piedmont had settled into a new rhythm.

Not the old gossip hum.
Not the sharp edge of speculation.

Something slower.

More deliberate.

Because once a man is known to be coming home, a town begins to arrange its face.

At the diner, Pearl was already ahead of it.

“He’ll be back by the weekend,” she said, pouring coffee with the calm certainty of someone who had seen enough recoveries to know the pattern.

Sheriff Reeves nodded.

“Yep. The doctors are talking about discharge,” he confirmed.

Beulah Mae pressed a hand to her chest.

“Well, praise the Lord,” she said. Then, after a beat, “Folks better mind their manners when he does.”

Earl snorted softly.

“Folks around here always mind their manners,” he said.

Pearl gave him a long look.

“They mind them better when they know they’ve been noticed.”

In Birmingham, Vernon stood unaided at the window again.

Not leaning.

Not bracing.

Just standing.

Sawyer Kate watched from the chair beside the bed.

“You’re steadier,” she said.

“I’m stubborn,” he corrected.

She smiled faintly.

“That too.”

He was quiet for a moment.

Then he said, “I remember the lights.”

Her attention sharpened.

“Headlights?” she asked.

He shook his head slowly.

“No. Hospital.”

He lifted one hand, slow but sure.

“I remember waking up and not knowing my own name.”

That sat heavy between them.

“And now?” she asked gently.

He looked at her.

“Now I know what matters,” he said.

Across town, Oliver Kinzalow sat in a meeting that was growing less comfortable by the minute.

“We need clarity on Parcel C,” one investor said.

“That parcel is privately held,” Oliver replied smoothly.

“Yes,” the voice said. “But is it obtainable?”

Oliver paused.

Careful men know the weight of certain words.

“Not at present,” he said.

The silence that followed was polite.

But not pleased.

Back in Piedmont, the Tate house had begun to look lived-in again.

Sawyer Kate had opened the windows.

Run water through the pipes.

Set fresh towels in the bathroom.

Not because Vernon demanded comfort.

Because she knew he would notice the effort.

Sheriff Reeves stopped by late that afternoon.

“I reckon he’ll want quiet when he gets back,” the sheriff said.

“He’ll get it,” she replied.

The sheriff hesitated.

“Town’s trying,” he added.

She nodded once.

“I know.”

That evening, the sky finally broke just enough to spit a thin, half-hearted rain across Piedmont.

Not the hard February downpour.

Just a reminder.

At the diner, Earl watched the droplets streak the window.

“Funny,” he murmured.

“What is?” Pearl asked.

“That week it poured like the sky had a grudge,” he said. “Now it don’t seem to have the heart.”

Pearl dried a cup slowly.

“Storms spend themselves,” she said. “So do people.”

In Birmingham, Vernon finished his last full therapy circuit of the day.

When he reached the end of the hall, he didn’t stop.

He turned.

And walked it again.

Sister Bernadette watched from the nurses’ station.

“He’s ready,” she said quietly.

Sister Paul nodded.

“Yes,” she agreed. “He is.”

As night settled over Piedmont, the porch light on Babbling Brook Road came on without hesitation.

Steady.

Warm.

Waiting.

And across town, Oliver Kinzalow stood alone in his office and finally allowed himself one unguarded thought:

The man did not break.

That complicated everything.

Because in Piedmont, a man who endures tends to redraw the map without raising his voice at all.

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About Ol' Big Jim

Jim L. Wright is a storyteller with a lifetime of experiences as colorful as the characters he creates. Born and raised in Piedmont, Alabama, Jim’s connection to the land, history, and people of the region runs deep. His debut novel New Yesterdays is set in his hometown, where he grew up listening to stories of the past—stories that sparked his imagination and curiosity for history. Today, Jim lives in Leeds, Alabama, with his husband Zeek, a tour operator who shares his passion for adventure and discovery. Known affectionately as “Ol’ Big Jim,” he has had a diverse career that includes time as a storekeeper, an embalmer, a hospital orderly, and a medical coder. There are even whispers—unconfirmed, of course—that he once played piano in a house of ill repute. No matter the job, one thing has remained constant: Jim is a teller of tales. His stories—sometimes humorous, sometimes thought-provoking—are often inspired by his unique life experiences. Many of these tales can be found on his popular blog, Ol’ Big Jim, where he continues to share his musings with a loyal readership. Jim’s adventures have taken him far beyond Alabama. For seven years, he lived in Amman, Jordan, the world’s oldest continuously inhabited city. His time there, spent in smoky coffee shops, enjoying a hookah and a cup of tea while scribbling in his ever-present notebook, deeply influenced his worldview and his writing. When Jim isn’t writing, he’s thinking about writing. His stories, whether tall tales from his past or imaginative reimagining is of historical events should read from his past or imaginative reimaginings of historical events, reflect a life lived fully and authentically. With New Yesterdays, Jim brings readers a rich tapestry of history, fantasy, and human connection. Visit his blog at www.olbigjim.com to read more of his stories, or follow him on social media to keep up with his latest musings and projects, one of which is a series that follows Bonita McCauley, an amateur detective who gets into some very sticky situations. His book, New Yesterdays, can be found at Amazon US, Amazon UK, Smashwords, and Barnes and Noble.
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